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(On the Eve of) What Comes in Time
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(On the Eve of) What Comes in Time |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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[On the Eve of] What Comes in Time What came to me, in raucous times ago, Were hues of blues to this poet's green eye, That there be a place I would come to know Where passions and poetry flew so high! At times, seemingly lost, I thought I was At bitter odds with my own cast-off ends But that a muse should hear, then willed me "pause" To unearth heart’s want, where soreness might mend For this sweet craving I have had since youth To convey a falling tears’ salty feel In a place where poets gather, in truth With a worldly family’s love, so real What came in time, 'twas but a poet's dream A place where hesitant hearts bared ~ in trust ~ What stayed in this mind? A melody’s theme With rhythm's delights, and an angel's dust Where moths may flit over bards who might roar While writers of angst, search seekers of truth As mountains find peaked heights, lost souls hunt shores As aged sages find their fountains of youth What came in time, was a place most surreal Where love plus life plus poets, equals Feel. ~*~ June 24, 2003 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-24-2003 09:18 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very, very nice Karilea! I sometimes wonder what would have happened if I had consodered writing in an earlier incarnation. (Or, how long I would have continued) Ed |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
What came in time, was a place most surreal Where love plus life plus poets, equals Feel. what beautiful closing lines and words of poetry "K" A voice of honesty |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
From the sun of our earth From the stars of our night From the soul of our essence From the heaven's lights. From these and more, so much more comes our home to us, here among stars.. You, dear lady...are but one of them that burns ever brightly here... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Karilea..Passion's is all this and more.. and, you m'dear are our morning sun and evening sunset. You go out of your way to do things that make a difference in people's lives. You have a beautiful way about you that causes magical things to happen. On the eve of your fourth anniversary here may I say thank you so much for all you have brought to Passion's! Happy Anniversary dear Lady! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, you haven't been listening.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (06-24-2003 09:48 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Karilea..we always feel when we read your words...thank you for allowing us to experience your wisdom, talent and creativity.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea....you are one special lady and have encouraged me when I was down - I thankyou for that. Plus, your poetry always is a pleasure to read. You are a bright light on a dark and foggy pathway. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY! hugs, Chris  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...You have brightened my day with your sun so many times...I am thankful for you, as a poet and a friend.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, you have proven to be a very good friend to have. You are always there for whoever needs you. I appreciate you and your poetry and replies. Thank you for being you, Lady Sunshine.  Happy Anniversary, my friend Heart Hugs to you Ethel |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
....and the student, is still learning, from the best and yes, Happy Anniversary @ Pip |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always in awe... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Karilea...an endless chill runs through me. Do you visit my mind? Connections, my sister, connections. Patricia |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Excellent... I am certainly glad to be a part of this, even if only a small part  ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, =========================================== As aged sages find their fountains of youth =========================================== Is that what keeps me coming back? Lovely write dear lady. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love pours out from your pen and beauty, always. Thank you for touching me too with your sunrays .... Four years? Over 36000 sunrays shared ... WOW! It IS wonderful to stay among poets indeed. Also inspiring each other. Your words stir beautiful feelings. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your eloquent words deserve an eloquent reply, but my words fail me, dear poetess... Loving hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, I'm keeping this...to try to learn some more from you........and just because.......  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What came in time, 'twas but a poet's dream A place where hesitant hearts bared ~ in trust ~ What stayed in this mind? A melody’s theme With rhythm's delights, and an angel's dust Where moths may flit over bards who might roar While writers of angst, search seekers of truth As mountains find peaked heights, lost souls hunt shores As aged sages find their fountains of youth What came in time, was a place most surreal Where love plus life plus poets, equals Feel. ==================================== I cant imagine this place without you... I hope we dont ever have to find out... Youve penned a poets anthem with this superb write..and the moth is loving every alliteration and inner rhyme.  Happy Anniversary poetess Sun... thank you for All that you share, teach and give here at pips and to me as friend. You have touched so many here with your poetry and your loving spirit. We grow in your light  All I can feel is this distance between you and me. I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me because touching is believing. c.j. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-25-2003 11:03 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That last line sums us well. *S* Beautiful poem to commemorate your anniversary... may it be a happy one! *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so very special Karilea and so are you my friend, my sis Happy Anniversary Sunshinygirl  Maree. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is an amazing poetic piece here, your muse surely worked wonders with your amazing mind! ~  for sure ARCTIC WIND |
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