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A Glint In Moonlight
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A Glint In Moonlight |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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A glint in the moonlight an icy dance of blade and flesh never pierced but held just so in mock of life in contemplation in revelations He knows better than to leave this way He knows better than to stray from paths unbeaten There is power in thoughts of a crimson release it lies in the will to turn away and continue on through darkness Where the glint is enough light to see him through another day [This message has been edited by Aenimal (06-21-2003 02:15 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry has a glint all it's own. You know that don't you? Rahp~ It's late and it's dark, and you always write.....just so~ Thanks for this soothing read~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-21-2003 02:29 AM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
"Where the glint is enough light to see him through another day" may it always be enough....amazing write |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Where the glint is enough light to see him through another day" dear one...this is the light at the end of the tunnel...h |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*tucks away her barney nightlight* guess you needn't really be needing this? *sigh* my words fail me at this moment..if only you knew If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: as long as that glint is only a glint and that flow stays where it should be Insightful I must say and amazingly strong to pen such a decision to travel onward I applaud you xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-21-2003 03:14 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
raw, honest, inspirational! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"Where the glint is enough light to see him through another day" Sometimes, tis enough. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
an icy dance of blade and flesh never pierced but held just so in mock of life in contemplation in revelations i think i want to paste the whole poem again, just in appreciation. your words here are a silky sharp combination of all that is life. bloody brilliant! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is power in thoughts of a crimson release it lies in the will to turn away and continue on through darkness Where the glint is enough light to see him through another day ~*~ Such power... Have you ever really seen will power at work? I have. It's mighty, I would even say magnificient. Sometimes we let go before we are even truly tested of its strength...and character. Raph...a good, strong write. I'm proud of you for leaving it here for all of us to read. Thank you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
an icy dance of blade and flesh never pierced but held just so very very nice lines, raf yes a dance on that fine line between really good, but, son, have you painted yet? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very powerful write, dear Raffaele, and I love the end lines especially, because there you express your true strength, even a sparkle is enough to hold on ... Mi piace mi piace. Abbracci. Margherita  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There is power in thoughts of a crimson release it lies in the will to turn away and continue on through darkness Where the glint is enough light to see him through another day Yes!!!!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you all very much, I have learned there is strength even in weakness. thanks for understanding and supporting the Blue means more to me than maybe even i know. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...dark, cold, powerful, and yet hopeful... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Kahlil thank you appreciate it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I Enjoyed reading this One! ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 You're missed. |
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