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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-20 09:33 PM



With the wisdom of the angels,
the ocean oscillates
between making love
and thrashing the shoreline;

yet the rock remains stoic,

once knocked down
by your immovable walls,

i find my antidote once again,
in my own self,

as i will forever flourish,

i the ocean,

undaunted by you.......
a mere bloodless stone




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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-20 10:25 PM


Utterly beautiful words. I love your poetry!
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-06-20 10:57 PM


beautiful words Mish..and flourish you have
passing shadows
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inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-06-21 07:32 AM


thanks kids
bklynboy
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florida
5 posted 2003-06-21 03:20 PM


nice write....inner strength is the best. Dont ever rely on anyone else.
dreambuilder
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caddyshack
6 posted 2003-06-21 05:44 PM


hmmmmmm....

the ocean oscillates
between making love
and thrashing the shoreline;

yet the rock remains stoic,

get a new rock
sounds like that pebble
couldnt appreciate anything
making love to thrashing ????
wow - lol

This poem is both thought provoking &
inspiring - I loved this one
Thank-you
inked

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-06-21 07:17 PM


dreamman, the pleasure is mine
QjQ
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8 posted 2003-06-21 07:49 PM


With the wisdom of the angels,
the ocean oscillates
between making love
and thrashing the shoreline;

terrific lines,, good write...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2008-07-31 03:39 PM


I'm ing it up because it's a wonderful Write!


ARCTIC WIND

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