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Open Poetry #27

The Girl's Gone

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-20 09:00 PM

shes alone
after to many years trying to be unique,different
shes distant
after to many sleepless nights trying to forget that one boy
shes gone
after to many dinners alone
shes faded
after trying to hard to be seen.

yours truly
Chelsea

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-20 10:31 PM

"shes faded
after trying to hard to be seen."

Totally feeling this one, awesome write, dahling.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-06-24 04:31 PM

enjoyed,,,

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-01-23 02:03 PM

That's so sad!
~hopefully she can heal!

ARCTIC WIND

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