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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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First mist of morning dew barefoot within and around you plant your feet beside mine quiet . . . clean . . . cool nothing to lock you Seasalt splash so fine Embody the brine Visualize the mist let it pass like a kiss through From me to you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Fresh and endearing little write from a fresh and endearing little wing!  ~ May you enjoy many such times... Linda |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
mmmmm Nice little sing, Sweet Kraw' |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sue dahling this is beyond gorgeous for a second there I felt a cool breeze...hmmm you know what btw my fave beatles song is 'from me to you'  ohh lol sorry ask Raph I'm on a kissey face fettish! btw you,sweet little one are amazing! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feels like that veil before the day lifts, when there is not yet the thud of reality and anything you dreamed the night before is possible........very pretty write , sue |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whee...I got goosebumps! Either your writing did it, or the AC turned on. Nah, don't hear the fans running, so it must have been your writing! More, please! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow this is really nice and creative. I can feel the mist in the morning and love the fresh clean feeling. Thanks for sharing! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mmmm...nice one...yup...me likes it!! Hugs, Chris  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Visualize the mist let it pass like a kiss through From me to you' Very cool littlewing. And the title is perfect for the feel this gives the reader.  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I read this three times...and closed my eyes to let in sink into my heart. Beatiful. Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I enjoyed this, so alive, spontaneous, vibrant...just as your smile is.... thanx.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Can I claim this part as MINE? "Embody the brine" but yes...and now you've gone and reminded me of that dream I had...became one with the ocean, I did, and I could feel the waves in my veins...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... Thanks for this. Tis a natural high.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A very lovely write...I liked smiles and hugs...Lee J. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful words dear Sue!  Hugs. Margherita |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I was waiting for K to comment on the brine..nice right sue..sounds like a good plan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this had me imagining the beach sun blinding me and the breeze pushing the sea salt to the tip of my tongue and tasting the residue! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this had me there and wanted me to remain, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful Sue...you certainly inspire me tonight |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
suz...i love how you write...h |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
beautiful,joyous. thank you sue. Goldenrose. |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
I feel like I've just taken a breath of sea salted air with some elses lungs. This is aweing...place and feeling are very well defined. Great write. ~DW~ [This message has been edited by D'sWhisper (06-21-2003 05:05 AM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- This is simple, descriptive, and very touching... I hate you!!!!! You have never disappointed your audience, and you didn't start now. Great Job Once in a dream, far beyond these castle walls... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a wonderful happy read...thank you for writing and sharing...simply loving and so true! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seasalt splash so fine Embody the brine Visualize the mist let it pass like a kiss through From me to you Sue, this is really pretty. I like....  Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Isn't this the perfect visual!!! Loved the kiss passing through. Good job tweets~ |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
you have embodied the essence of reading your poetry the description is perfect thank-you for the continual blessings I'm sure even God is inspired by you Beautiful write my friend & as always - I look forward to more |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Linda - this actually is part of a meditative cleansing I used to visualize Guess I will have to start using it again Thanks Kraw - didnt even know I could sing . . . Thanks Kris - good good that is exactly what this write is meant to do Thank you Michele- a meditative piece for sure . . . and your outlook on it is exact Thanks Karilea - I hope it did - it is meant to calm Your welcome BB - good this is what I meant to convey hehehe Thank you Chris Duncan - cool - thank you - I wanted you to feeeel this . . . Excellent Patricia! Exactly what it is meant to do Thank you James glad you enjoyed Magnus - how sweet of you . . . thank you K: ahahah you know I thought of YOU when I wrote that line - it belonged to you long before I wrote it . . . thank you Thanks Lee glad you liked Thank you Margherita Raph: doesnt it though? We must try it some time thank you Very Cool Noah - it is suppossed to bring you right there - I am glad it did TY Inspire you Dixie? WOW I am honored thank you Your Welcome Phil - glad you liked DW - very cool - exactly what I meant for you to feel - thank you Brad - ahahahaha gee thanks - lmao over here . . . I hate you too . . . thank you was very sweet I think . . . Lee - thank you that was very sweet to say Ethel - thank you so much - glad you liked it dream - you are silly - and thank you for always reading me and responding with your most beautiful thoughts Thanks guys xxoo |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
What an adoring poem Sue... Serene.. it gives me warm fuzzies. ^_^Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Lynne . . . I finally see you !!!! LOL xxoo |
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