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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-06-20 06:00 AM


A Pleasure As Simple As A Smile

Love is an exact science.
Two people that share similar desires
meet at just the right
moment in time
and say exactly the
right words
and perform mind boggling actions
that blow each other away
until all resistance is
gone and all that is left is the
pursuit of love.

Or, is love awakened by
a pleasure as simple
as a smile, a touch, a look
that takes your breath away
and from that day forth neither
wants to look away from
this thing called love.

JamesLee
June20
2003


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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-06-20 06:22 AM


Nicely said indeed!
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

2 posted 2003-06-20 11:38 AM


nice write, thank you for sharing your thaughts.

Goldenrose.


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-06-20 11:40 AM


Yes..I know that kind of smile!
Good write James.
~Smiling at you, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

pisumnux
Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49
Troy, NY
4 posted 2003-06-20 11:40 AM


Well put.  Thanks for the write.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-06-20 11:56 AM


James:

OH MY GOODNESS
This is just  . . . silk
lovely
one of your best
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2003-06-21 05:11 AM


This is wonderful! enjoyed your poem of Love!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2004-05-10 03:30 AM


Thank you for the lovely responses...I have a friend and every time I see her she says..."So nice to be seeing you."...I feel like I am falling in love with her every time she says that...from her so sweet and touching...James
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