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Depths Of The Unsaid
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Depths Of The Unsaid |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Depths of The Unsaid Do you love me? Hmm... The earth quivers beneath me, in the rhythm of my heart beat when we talk, The thought of seeing your sweet face, plunges my soul into heavenly paradise, From the dreary gravyard of thoughts which exist without your radience, For you, I stand undone at a word. Across the many miles that separate us, all I can taste is your sweetness, I breathe only your freshness, forget me and I die in moments whisper, Your touch is the sweetest kiss of forever, I shall live an eternity in its moment, Hence my mortal hands age, bereft. For the evening gales of serenity leave my kisses at your window cill, In the fairy cupped dewdops, as they unfold and run to your fingertips, Finding home, while I wait in the glare of the streaming moonlight through the shady hibiscus, Waiting for hope... The night passes slowly, crawling with the lingering feel of solitude, As I lay sleepless in my bed, clueless in your splendour, breathles to your smile, The silence deafens me, its the existence of a bond unspoken, Because of the desire to keep my heart unbroken. Yet, it has already been broken, yes, three times over, My heart was broken first at your smile, then again at your voice, Then upon the realisation that there is one that I miss by my side, One that I never had, but miss as though I did. For without you, even my shadow haunts me, and my pen mocks me daily, For what good is a shadow, that can't bring me your love, It is even a dead man's company, and a pen which can't inscribe your splendour, Is mute. Nor can my desire be accounted for on paper, many times have i fallen silent to you, Because the unspoken drowns me out, don't you hear it... How long must I wait to breathe again...to feel again...to live again... For a heart less man cannot live; So I won't, till you return it to me. I have no answer, except what I feel. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is awesome...h |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 urgh I'm speechless!!!!! I hate when u do that to me lol & honestly I think no words justify what I'm feeling right now, sweetie...you amaze me and make me cry...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-29-2003 06:12 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, you speak beauty, and truth. Sandra |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOW!! you left ME speechless! This is absoultely breathtaking. I felt every word of this deep within my soul! Such a tender, beautiful, awesome write! Take care. Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and you expressed those deep feelings exceptionally well. Warm hugs, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very beautiful write, thank you so much for sharing. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well you have expressed these difficult and deep emotions. But we each have to express to each other these depths, for change to be accomplished. Muster your courage poet...and conquer the fear. TD |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I agree, this is surely a masterpiece! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Ashling New Member
since 2003-08-01
Posts 5Minnesota |
Truly piercing and tender. I am transfixed by the emotional power of your words here. Gabriel, I am brand new here and had no idea the wealth of gifts you and your PiP family share. Melissa |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
An outpouring of your soul...poignantly expressed. Patricia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gabriel - this is one kind of a precious woman you write about. Nicely done... BC |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Thank you everyone. It makes my lonesome wandering easier knowing you all can relate. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...good or bad...we are left with feelings to deal with...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nice to read again. Miss your pen, Gabriel. ~tier |
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