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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-19 11:06 PM




words spill
from within

heart and soul
release
trapped thoughts

love and despair
h
  a
   n
    g........ midair

poetic passages
wander like leaves
in rainfall

seeking destination




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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-06-19 11:09 PM


. . . looks like they found their way . . .

beautiful Michele
xxoo

Canon_D_111
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since 2003-06-04
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2 posted 2003-06-19 11:17 PM


a tree grows in brooklyn...your leaves make for great reading
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-06-19 11:29 PM


words spill
from within

heart and soul
release
trapped thoughts


Michelle, I love this part especially....
so true.....
Hugs   :hugs;
Ethel


bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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4 posted 2003-06-19 11:30 PM


Lots of trees grow in Brooklyn. Good movie by the way. Nice poem Michele. Wish I had your talents......(sigh)
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5 posted 2003-06-19 11:30 PM


You do have a touch....I'm going through at least three iterations of exactly that, at this very moment, and trying to describe it as well as you have, would only have added a fourth.

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gemjop
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6 posted 2003-06-23 10:25 AM


you make me smile. back to the top with this.
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-08-11 12:18 PM


Beautiful Write Dear Ink!


ARCTIC WIND

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