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BluesSerenade (haiku)
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BluesSerenade (haiku) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
OMG... this issssssssss breathtaking |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nice, now, if I could just do those things like that.... I know a poetess that will be impressed as well... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
In awe, once again. You are voicing the poetry of the poets. I applaud.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Edder, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, I can see the wonderful haiku syndrome has got to you too, and you too have written with this form so beautifully! (big hugggsssssss) I just know Lori is going to love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-19-2003 09:23 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup, indeed this is cool. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is just beautiful! I'm keeping it! Maree |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You flatter me Edder. Tossed and harried....that's so me! ugh!! This is just beautiful, what a sweetie you are! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Edder, this is beautiful. The haiku goes perfectly with the picture. I know Lori loves it...I can tell. Hugs  Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Artful and well done! ThisDiamond |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No, Blues, he doesn't flatter you at all....that's a snapshot you're looking at -- enjoy! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok smarty pants! Hey Edder, That's a pretty picture, I thought I saw myself there for a minute. Just ignore the rat in the rafters. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yep, you saw right. All of it is you. He chose each well. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Edder: Oh My this is beautiful! This is perfecccctttt!!!! What a sweet soul you are xxoo the both of you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this goes to my library, no question  love it! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Helen- you always know how to make me feel good. thank you Mangus- i have a feeling you would do very well. thanks for the read Karen- awe? leave that one alone...that's my department i'm humbledNoah- once again, thank you for your kind words. Larry- good to see you here again. glad you liked it. Maree- awww...you're too sweet! thank you Ethel- thanks so much ThisDiamond- why thank you, glad you thought so. Ed- a snapshot taken from the poetry of a very talented lady Sue- a sweet soul? wow! thanks! SEA- you honor me, thank you so much |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Lori- i just wanted you to know how much i enjoyed reading your work over the last few days in preparation for this. i only hope this brings brings a smile to your face, as your poetry has surely drawn one on my heart. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Edder...Blowing you a kiss on the cheek and a big old hug for that. Of course this made me smile, if you only knew. Thank you again. Burst my bubble anytime rat! winkin'. Isn't this place the greatest!!! What the heck, the snapshot alone is worth a bump! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'll consider that a standing invitation.....! ...but I'm no good at all with glasswork....crack it every time.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
bad part is...i'm runnin out of good snapshots... almost time to head out with the camera again, unless you think it would be ok to post haiku on pictures of my dog!  [This message has been edited by Edder (06-20-2003 01:23 AM).] |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
lol, I'm sure your big scary dog wouldn't mind! I don't care what you say...HE SCARES ME!!!! :Þ Love this, hun! I wish I could do haikus like you ;_;.....Wait...haiku...haiku..s....oh here we go again!!!! lol Love you Mr. McEddles!!!!I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome work! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ok, that one gave me a little chill... |
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