Open Poetry #27 |
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Wordless, I |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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![]() And when my heart fills spills, in overflow wordless I speak in soul’s silent glow love, it’s always been you beyond breath my intrinsic prayer love, it’s always been you, there and when it’s spilling ever, refilling wordless I speak ohh....if only you knew love, it’s always been, you ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... nicely done my friend.. a wstful statement of love... someone should listen to the wordless then.. and hear the heart behind all this... I enjoyed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and when it’s spilling ever, refilling wordless I speak ohh....if only you knew love, it’s always been, you ====================================== Beautiful Sea...simply beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This explains... why I need a hanky. This... exquisite! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
when you write of love i can almost believe again...grins love yer writes glad theyre back and a little more frequent |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful, stunning, touching... You could not have done better than this... Thanx Sue.. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron~ someone should...thanks so much ![]() Nancy~ thank you very much! Karilea~ ![]() Raph~ believe... ![]() Barry~ super cool, thank you! |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness, this is just lovely!! hugs to you for this piece SEA. Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Love is meant to be such an illustrious emotion, and I don't think a sole word can describe the inevitable joy and afterglow of it! (kiss on cheek) This is most gorgeous, sweet friend, Godf Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful presentation and words... nice to have you back, SEA hugs M |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
Good poem. It spills, but it is ever refilling. Beautiful. "There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature." |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, =================== wordless I speak ohh....if only you knew love, it’s always been, you ==================== How could anyone not know? If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my goodness this is lovely... whats in the water where you moved to? Something or someone has got your poetry all fired up... ![]() Love the rhyme and delicate word weaving of this Susan. Tis a gem of pen ![]() No matter what the differences |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Chris~ wow, thanks! ![]() Noah~ always so sweet, thank you Maureen~ thank you for reading me ![]() Pisumnux~ thank you Larry~ you’d be surprised ![]() Janet~ you are too kind...as for the water? It’s goooood ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
It wouldn't take me this long: ![]() I would have it figured out by this time: ![]() I'm just telling you it's a no brainer! ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We're still on the same page I see. I recenty wrote something along the same lines while in a dark mood. Yours is much breezier. This is awful pretty. It's really nice to read you SEAgal~ I hope life is good! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
...and speechless, am i. your heart speaks volumes, my dear |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
SEA...This poem left me speechless with its wondrous beauty, captivating images. ***Ivy Rose |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Beautiful piece |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wordless?--You? May your SEA of words never dry up! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write, awesome presentation |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply stunning...love those victorian laced dresses...so beautiful your words...a very good write... |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I love it! ![]() ![]() |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Inspiration at it's finest! Greatly enjoyed |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Absolute love expressed here! WOW! A delightfully romantic read! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Excellant..... as ever.... thank you for your words.... Goldenrose. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Susan...this is so softly beautiful. You are really on a roll lately, and I am LOVING your poetry. Not only are the verses lovely, but I know them. You've been writing my heart. Big hugs to you, friend, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-27-2003 06:18 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how I am pulled towards the sea...and always your poems are refreshing...that dress in the picture, reminds me of my wedding dress...lace and the Victorian era was so elegant. Thank you as always for your lovely flowing words. |
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