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dani
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since 2003-05-10
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0 posted 2003-06-19 12:12 PM



a steriotypical blond
long hair bue eyes large chest
boys want her, she's best

they only think about looks
not about her thoughts
don't they know how many battles she's fought

can't they see it hurts
for them to see her as an item
she hasn't got the strength to fight them

she's been driven mad
steriotypical veiws made her cut
they are the ones that made her a slut

how many ways to say i love u... just 1... you make me want to die

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Forgotenandgone
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since 2003-05-07
Posts 52
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1 posted 2003-06-19 12:14 PM


That is a very good poem i like it because thats what most people dont see...they just see "her" as an airhead...

_______________________________________
Please dont cry when i die
For i will be whatching in heaven
and i dont want it to rain on my funeral...

dani
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since 2003-05-10
Posts 46

2 posted 2003-06-19 12:16 PM


i hate it when people veiw me as that that's why i wrote it
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
3 posted 2003-06-19 12:25 PM


dani, this is touching! Sincerely, Sauni.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-19 12:57 PM


I understand
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-23 12:30 PM


indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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