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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-18 06:27 PM


No Fit

I wish
there was
a window
that I
could open
to let
it all out
but no window
is this wide
to fit
my emotions
through


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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1 posted 2003-06-18 06:45 PM


(slightly smart remark removed . . . not as humorous as I thought, sorry)

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (06-18-2003 08:33 PM).]

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-06-18 06:46 PM


That's usually about the time I kick down the walls.
Krawdad
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3 posted 2003-06-18 08:31 PM


h,
(Excuse my earlier slightly smart remark, I can fix that.)

Is this not your window?  This PIP pane?  Chameleon that it might be, it is large.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-06-18 09:05 PM


another one that "does fit" my mood.

Very Nice, Helen

M

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2003-06-19 01:27 AM


Very well done....Love the way you put this across.
Forgotenandgone
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since 2003-05-07
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6 posted 2003-06-19 01:28 AM


thats was cool...

_______________________________________
Please dont cry when i die
For i will be whatching in heaven
and i dont want it to rain on my funeral...

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-06-19 01:32 AM


you just have to find someone who knows how to open it, because it's there
Larry C
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8 posted 2003-06-19 02:04 AM


Helen,
Maybe you could take notes from Karen. Peace...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2003-06-19 12:30 PM


Wrecking ball should make a hole nice enough to fit it all through..or get blues to send over her window man grin
pisumnux
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since 2003-06-11
Posts 49
Troy, NY
10 posted 2003-06-19 12:35 PM


No window is ever big enough.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-06-19 12:55 PM


lol @ raph
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
12 posted 2008-02-23 12:20 PM


Your emotions must be very big!

Let them all out!

ARCTIC WIND

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