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OwlPoet
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since 2003-06-18

Posts 17
Fullerton, California, Urantia

0 posted 2003-06-20 07:57 PM

Solstice with the Sky Dancers

Our solstice dance shadows the waning moon tonight,
though we have never been apart as long before my love,
softly sewn together for just a moment in this orbit dance,
a weave of light slowly spinning and spinning an old pavane,
we dream anew the flights of chance.

We share this crossing again as the moment we share...
we radiate more than that glow
as her light grows inside us
knowing that we are always one soul.

There is no other sign to point the way,
no detour to heaven's gates
on this narrow road through our final passing
on this longest day,
to sate our thirst.

These are our flowers to grow
in a better loam than before,
in deeper dreams that only lovers know,
as simple shadows we have sown.

Will Patrick

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-20 08:41 PM

You speak my language.

And YES...it's that time again.

The Ratleader was right. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite reads.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-06-20 08:45 PM

Simply beautiful and so is the universe, your words develop a picture of beautiful images.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-06-20 09:03 PM

softly sewn together for just a moment in this orbit dance,
a weave of light slowly spinning and spinning an old pavane,
we dream anew the flights of chance.

You definitely have a way with words, Mr. Owl! *G* This is beautiful! *S*

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-06-21 12:29 PM

"we dream anew the flights of chance.
(love the way that sounds)

knowing that we are always one soul.
(sigh)

These are our flowers to grow
in a better loam than before,
in deeper dreams that only lovers know,
as simple shadows we have sown."

Truly, beautiful

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-21 12:34 PM

Our solstice dance shadows the waning moon tonight,
though we have never been apart as long before my love,
softly sewn together for just a moment in this orbit dance,
a weave of light slowly spinning and spinning an old pavane,
we dream anew the flights of chance.

Will, this is so, so beautiful

By the way, I went to your webpages and looked around a little. I like it a lot and am going back to visit and read more of your poetry. You are a very good writer with much talent, Sir. Yes, Ed was right!!

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-21-2003 12:35 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-21 04:13 AM

awesome! a fantastic write!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-06-21 11:06 AM

*sigh*

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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8 posted 2003-06-22 01:39 AM

"These are our flowers to grow
in a better loam than before,
in deeper dreams that only lovers know,
as simple shadows we have sown."

This resonates in me....something I've felt, that you have expressed in the way I wish I'd done. Thanks for it, Will....

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-06-23 01:20 AM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Will, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am blessed to read your gorgeous poetry too that seems to put twilight and dawn together like two lovers! (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Will, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-06-23 08:39 AM

Absolutely beautiful!
Very much enjoy your writing.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2003-06-23 09:54 AM

Welcome Owlpoet, to the fold

I see that you have already met some of the very best here.

Good write, good read

~wranx

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-08-11 12:00 PM

Very Vivid and Beautiful!

ARCTIC WIND

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