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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I Wonder I have written you poetry in sand and sat watching the water carefully gather each word gently delivering them to your shore did you feel my hand in foam and froth does it cool the heat of your ache I wonder and I wonder do you just view or do you wade in knee deep then immerse yourself totally in my thoughts to feel what I feel |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...A wonderful introspection, H... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Good question, enjoyed. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, One of your best! I so totally love this. Excellent the things this does to my heart. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
and I wonder do you just view or do you wade in knee deep then immerse yourself totally in my thoughts to feel what I feel Helen, I've wondered the same thing myself. I do think think that the majority take the poems to heart and can feel whatever the poet is writing.  Hugs to you, Lady  Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well Helen, this is another one of your wonders to put into my library!! hugs to you for this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This is absolutely WONDERFUL~ I felt the movement of the water, rippling your sand-thoughts to another's shore~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I wonder, when am i going to be able to write like this.... ~~I wonder and I wonder do you just view or do you wade in knee deep then immerse yourself totally in my thoughts to feel what I feel~~ Helen, beautiful thoughts, love reading them. much love, gemma xxxxx  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i wade A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good!good description i felt as if i was there. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - words that only you can write... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
God this is brilliant, what an image |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
to feel what i feel,a question i ask everyday |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think you know the answer to that |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What a wonderful question. I loved the way your verses flow. Plus, you make me think. Patricia |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
i knwo i havent replied to any of your pieces in a while.. but you were always one of my favorite poets here.... this was a nyce piece you wrote.. and i do agree as some of the people who have replied have already ststed.. these are words that only you could write.... keep up the good work. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Beautifully etched...as always. Natural yet as deep as the ocean. Sincerely, Reg |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
"and sat watching the water carefully gather each word gently delivering them to your shore..." brilliant! i love this! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love this piece very MUCH! Gosh, its so beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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