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joyfull girl
Junior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 15

0 posted 2003-06-12 12:37 PM

I’ve kept everything
Letters tucked away
Tears kept moist in my heart
Can’t forget
Your arms
Won’t forget
Completely alone
Silence mocks me
Your apathy breaks me
Silence worse than rage
Fly at me with all your fire
Rather than leave me alone
In my silence

[This message has been edited by joyfull girl (06-12-2003 12:42 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-12 12:40 PM

very good write,, i enjoyed reading...welcome to pip!!!

QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-12-2003 12:41 AM).]

crimson tear
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 76
Massachusetts

2 posted 2003-06-12 12:54 PM

very nice. I liked this one. I've been through stuff like this. The pain does ease in time. Keep it coming.

joyfull girl
Junior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 15

3 posted 2003-06-12 12:57 PM

Thanks for the comments guys

This is the first thing I have written in a while and my first post here.I would love to hear everyone's thoughts on it
:-)
Joy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-06-12 09:17 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please, check
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Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2003-06-12 09:28 AM

WElcome to our world

...what a sad sad poem you ahve written. I can relate to this one.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-06-12 09:30 AM

the silence of apathy is mocking..and certainly more to the opposite of love than even hate itself...

welcome to the sight... look forward to reading more.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-06-12 09:37 AM

I enjoyed reading your first post.
I hope to read more of your
poetry. I hope that
you like it here.
and, welcome!

Hugs

Ethel
(garysgirl)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-06-12 10:24 AM

Enjoyed your first post!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-06-12 11:06 AM

Welcome to Passions, joyfull girl!

I do know what you mean, "Silence can kill!"
Enjoyed your debut poem!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

idleeyes86
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 64
Somewhere over the rainbow

10 posted 2003-06-12 11:22 AM

Welcome to pip a very good start I shall look forward to reading some more, keep 'em coming.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-06-12 12:00 PM

welcome to passions

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-06-16 11:31 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) This is a very heartwrenching debut, dearest friend, yes, the fire must be maintained, and if not, the whole world can reel at 66,000,000 miles an hour like the Earth around the sun! (sigh) This is wonderful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Joy, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joy, thank you for sharing!