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Hold my Hand in Your Mind
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Hold my Hand in Your Mind |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Mid-morning blazon with blue skies and the colors of life Sun-light and beauty flow a brush of bright yellow hibiscus Somehow a small acknowledgement, catching praise Where earthen magnetic spirit joins with body and mind What more can I declare… That within my pocket of passions lay pure golden dripping sap Upon this fruitful vale boars an odor of rich perfume There are bright growths of gentle showers, ethereal fires Meeting and laughing once more…where a breath of significant Brushes my fears…fuming from life And every domain becomes Broadened by a sure sweet song…fashioned melodious With a generous maze…not knowing where it derives from But…attributes the divine, is where we lay There in, none who neither claims equal…nor finds no better friend Hold my hand in your mind…when danger springs There is nothing which can shade the splendors of so bright a twosome Fixing firm abode…purging all boundaries of soul… We two ten myriads of oceans, in air-born breeze We lay gentlest swells of undulations, for those yet to come We lie down into pleasant dreams…sweet hymns of musical rhyme Peace passes through our hearts…blending a quiet place for us Harmony blooms boundless groves…springing days to come up long We flower a thousand voices of meanings…what could be more noble or free We are the answers to questions restored We pulse strong together in early morn We are the bubbles of the largest waves Twilight singing a overs praise An ocean song given in pearls of faith We are the winds that sound through the trees Yielding ourselves to a perfect whole..behemoth A swan like form whitened eternal skies Where sea-winds chant sweet lullaby Cradle my hand in your mind…weaving orchards gentile and kind We are souls above any doubt…free the pulse to saver earth Such delight statures and intoxicated, yet nothing can assimilate Not even the strongest of Gods…for we are filled with the heat and flame Of One God. Sacred flames, found within to-morrow…hold my mind in yours My love, my dearest, I’m there with you…..forever more Quote 'Not even a little death can knock down this house'. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful and gracefully romantic debut, sweet friend, He has a plan for every one of us and a special love for you to forever hold dear to your heart that non wind can ever knock that house down! This is mesmerizing, sweet friend, the imagery is just scintillating, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Lee, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I believe you're going to find yourself having a good time as you walk the many halls of poetry and discussions. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a grand entrance you've made. So many good thoughts in this. I enjoyed the read very much. *welcome, welcome* [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-19-2003 04:37 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Wow! Welcome to Passions! a fine write! good to have you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! What a wonderful entrance you have made! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Well, many thanks to all of you for your kind comments...greatly appreciate...please bare with me, as I'm new and do not know quit how to get around in here. What kind warm welcomes...many thanks to you all. Lee J. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee Welcome to PIP! there you are I have been looking all over for you! You will love it here nice entrance xxoo |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"There in, none who neither claims equal…nor finds no better friend Hold my hand in your mind…when danger springs There is nothing which can shade the splendors of so bright a twosome Fixing firm abode…purging all boundaries of soul… We two ten myriads of oceans, in air-born breeze We lay gentlest swells of undulations, for those yet to come We lie down into pleasant dreams…sweet hymns of musical rhyme Peace passes through our hearts…blending a quiet place for us" oh there's more, but this stands out for me the most...excellent! Welcome  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This is lovely, and welcome to Passions! looks like your finding your way around fine! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Lee... especially the ending! *S* Such lovely images... welcome to Passions! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your palette is heavy with color, enjoyed. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
absolutely a treasure to hold onto, this one! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Awe, so this is where the poetic LeeJ started! ~ Excellent, romantic and poetically written write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow. Thanks A.W. LeeJ's first post? my my my, but I nearly missed out. She's got this mind that is like an alphabetical snowglobe. thanks for bringing this back up. Lee? I miss you baby.  |
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