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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-06-19 01:02 AM



Beneath the willows in the graceful moon shinning bright,
owls are hooting, wind blowing, you are my fantasy delight,

Magical flutes play their celtic tune, you and I share this kiss, sweetly underneath a magical moon,

Come my love, walk into my garden of fantasy,
let us lye down in green clover,

Kiss me passionately, every part of me, over and over,

Draw me ever so sweetly into you, into your veins, let me fill you completely, love without restrain,

Hear the crickets, the frogs, and the loon? nature has dedicated to us tonight, their song of love, and sweet lovers tune,

Hold me close, as close as breath, to where I cannot breathe, release your passion all over me,

As we become one, together with nature, bodies softly moving to their song,

My heart is connected to you, beating in lovers rhythem,
I am intoxicated, under your spell, for you say poetic words for only MY heart to feel,

As we kiss, as you breathe heavily upon my face, you smile, and I feel I am at heavens' gates,

This only makes me want you more, and as your hands touch my face,
The angels give us our blessing and bestow upon us their loveing grace,

With each kiss, each touch, I desire more of your love, moonlit night, hours upon no end,

How could you bestow upon me so much passion, so much love? that your heart, your body contained?

We slowly subside, and as we lay, arms in arms looking up into the sky,

Our world has changed, our life has truely begun, we feel complete within knowing, love has truely come,

As we sleep, our love becomes destiny, in loves magical garden of fantasy!




[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-19-2003 01:05 AM).]

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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-06-19 01:43 AM


Very beautiful and romantic!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-19 01:44 AM


I am enjoying these between the two of you.
ethome
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3 posted 2003-06-19 01:45 AM


Beautiful tender romantic words.
A thoroughly enjoyable read!

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2003-06-19 06:05 AM


Absolutely stunning..! loved the nature and grace of the whole piece.

Truly a person could not be more honoured with this poem than i am with this.

Thank you my sweet princess.

Goldenrose.


LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-06-19 06:53 AM


Hello, it was a pleasure to read this beautiful poem...thank you for sharing...Lee J.


inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-06-19 06:59 AM


took me to heaven
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-06-19 03:38 PM


sunshine...thank you! it all comes from the heart, and my muse of course, GR!

Passing shadows....yes, I am glad someone noticed,I promise there will be more!

ethome...I am glad you liked it, love has a way of touching many hearts!

Phil, your welcome my dear sweet prince, for you only, you inspire my heart with your beautiful Love, poetry for me, it is an Honour to make you happy!

Lee...welcome to Passions! thank you!

Inkedgoddess....Heaven, yes there where I am right now, Heaven, it is so wonderful!

Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2003-06-20 01:27 AM


Romantic Heart...This poem is magical and full of true love's passionate breath. Very well written and you can tell from your words that love has touched your heart and soul.  ***Ivy Rose
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2003-06-20 01:32 AM


Thank you Ivy, your words are too kind, When you have a muse, your a runaway frieght train running off the tracks!
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2008-02-25 07:14 PM



Beneath the willows in the graceful moon shinning bright,
owls are hooting, wind blowing, you are my fantasy delight,......"

very Lovely ARH!

ARCTIC WIND

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