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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-19 10:26 AM


         ~ Into Fantasy I escape ~

   Im racing towards my fantasies inside
           Wanting to break free
          From this world of lies
              And just fly away
             High into the skies

      Floating through my own world
            Happy as could be
          Watching the unicorns
                  Ride by

         As I skim the waters surface
         Little fairies dance around
             Singing their songs
                Into my soul
             Before I moved on
         Towards the forest of hope

        As I dodge the trees within
         Flying in and out of sight
             I see elves hunting
                In the night

           Finally I break free
      And come out on the otherside
           Where the castle lays

        I fly through the window
           And there she sits
           A princess waiting
             For her prince

© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-06-19 10:39 AM


Well, this one speaks directly to me, my inner child--and my muse! You just made us all VERY happy!

May your wondrous imagination know no boundaries!

Warm hugs,
EA

Forgotenandgone
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since 2003-05-07
Posts 52
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2 posted 2003-06-19 10:46 AM


Nice poem...it was well written and i like that elves hunting thing...

_______________________________________
Please dont cry when i die
For i will be whatching in heaven
and i dont want it to rain on my funeral...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-19 01:49 PM


good stuff love the pic!
RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2003-06-19 02:51 PM


hey earth angel - glad you enjoyed the read


forgotenandgone - thanks for reading the poem glad you enjoyed the read

passing shadow - glad you like my pic glad you enjoyed the read

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-24 11:58 AM


Enjoyed your fantasy filled Poem!

ARCTIC WIND

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