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Time to Sleep |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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The evening burns, the candle's shadow turns upon itself, and yearns to carry me beyond the doors of dreams, to worlds that seem to wear more comfortably with every passing life. ©2003 by icebox |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Is it something that settles into the bones? I don't know. Maybe I'll find out tonight. Time to snuff the shadow maker . . . Kraw' |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yes yes.. |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
Dude haha you write amazingly i really enjoy reading what you write... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 waving g'nite, icethis one should tuck me in nicely better than re-reading my own writes tonight  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing is like a soothing balm, icebox. Oh yes, I do love the hush in your words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
to worlds that seem to wear more comfortably with every passing life. yes... enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... beyond ... and when you awake again into this world you still feel some remnants of comfort ... Beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "beyond the door of dreams" Lovely...thank you. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I always like more said with less.... succinctly done man. You burn. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always have loved the poems about shadows and candles |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smooth...James |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Krawdad ~ Yeah, maybe. Like dust and mold. *grin* Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment. Aenimal ~ Oh yeah, definitely. *smile* Forgotenandgone ~ OH WOW! Like, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! *grin* Thank you for reading my poem and for you comment. Midnitesun ~ *laugh* You are one of the people I read when I get fed up tying to fix my stuff. I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your comment. BluesSerenade ~ Oh sweet Blues, thank you. passing shadows ~ *smile* always thought of you as a candle light lady. I am glad you liked this. Thank you for reading it and for taking time to comment. Capt Hair ~ I am glad you liked it. Thank you for your comment. Margherita ~ Only occasionally, but those few times are precious. Thank you for reading my poem and for taking time to comment. Martie ~ Hi my friend, I am glad you enjoyed this. Just as in Huxley's thoughts on the Doors of Perception, beyond the doors of dreams there is some times amazing truth. Thank you for reading it. Local Rebel ~ Sometimes large thoughts do fit in small words. Not my best skill but I try. Thank you for reading this and for your comment. James Michael ~ Yes, nothing jarring before sleep. Thank you for taking time to comment. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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