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When The Rain Beats Down
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When The Rain Beats Down |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars 
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Sometimes, the sunny skies above Turn stormy, dark, and gray An icy rain begins to fall And we cannot find the way. But when those times befall you Just take a look around Because, my friend, I'll be there for you When the rain beats down. 6-10-03  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic. This made me think about Liam. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I'll be there for you, when the rain beats down"--very loving--and poetic!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Julie, I'm glad it brought a romantic thought to mind! Thank you, Linda, I'm glad it came across that way!  to you both,Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww...I like this very much....but when the rain beats down for me...I dance  |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I was just passing through when I spotted the title, I am most glad that I took the chance to take a little time and read it as it was well worth it. You have used such beautiful language to express such a wonderful sentiment. Anyone who could count you as their friend should consider themselves lucky. Thanks for sharing  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Elizabeth, this is really pretty. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-19-2003 07:24 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice Liz...really enjoyed the read. And I....I love the rain. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I was going to write to you a simple little verse to let you know how great you are with friends I've certainly done worse... but, alas, my muse is gone hiding in the dark as a result I guess that I may make only this nonpoetic remark: Thanks for being there through all my rain *hugs*My name is Batman... but my friends call me Bob [This message has been edited by Skyfire (06-19-2003 09:17 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thank you everyone! Nancy--actually, I like the rain too! Rhonda--aw that's so sweet. No problem! You know where to find me and thanks for the poem too. ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
You should write greeting cards -- this would be great for one! Take a bump back to the top.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...had to read again |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thanks again passing shadows! Local Rebel--Funny you should say that. That's what I used to want to be! Maybe I'll give being a greeting-card writer another shot. Thank you! ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just bring the rain, Elizabeth - we need it... the thunder is here, the lightning not far behind... but so far, so downpour! Bring the Rain! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your making me miss my close friends...one that lives in California and one that passed away...James |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thank you for bringing my poem back up, Karilea! I'll pray that everyone gets the rain they need. James, thank you for reading. I'm sorry to hear about your friend.  ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sunshine: Very nice poem, should be on a romantic greeting card....this is better then most I have read on them.....ice |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
oops! I called you sunshine, but I know you are skyshine......ice |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Ice~that's ok! A lot of people get it mixed up with something or other. Thank you for reading and replying to me! Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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