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Open Poetry #27

I Won't Breathe

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-18 11:34 PM

my stomach is turing
another day
another day i have to face you
to see you
to breathe you
your everywhere i go
everything i do
your my cliche
i cant get away
i cant run way
i pass you in the hallway
uneasy glances
i take one last breath of you
then walk by
i wont breathe anymore
if it means leaving this feeling behind

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-18 11:36 PM

I have known this feeling. Very harsh world out there. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-19 02:31 AM

yeah, I know this well

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-06-20 02:27 PM

your my cliche
I cant get away

those are awesome lines . . .

Have a couple of cliches I would like to get away from myself . . .
xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-01 02:56 PM

Powerful

ARCTIC WIND

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