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She Saw Red
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She Saw Red |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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She saw red it was a bleed. Shock at the race track had her see the crimson leak that kept her from a moment's rest An experience of a bleed back then had her cower from a torrent of kisses; shielded herself from unforsaken love how unwanted...how invasive. whatever shock that followed would rekindle the scarlet glow; a crimson leak...so long gone had sent its tentacles forward to mar her clarity of vision on the hunt to catch the vixen.... that same hunt that saw her horse suffer from a head-on collision re-enacted a childhood vision another hunt of course On the run..she would still see red until a man would have her confront a moment in her childhood past unearth an uncomfortable approach another man...actually her mother's lover; of the accident..suspicions hovered when she defended herself against an unwarranted love. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-14-2003 03:23 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martin, Seems I managed to take my literature course without reading! Hmmmm... Nice write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Guess that makes certain literature unique...hmmm had a storyboard in my head sparked by Hitchcock's Marnie...underrated compared to Psycho but a good thriller nonetheless  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-12-2003 12:33 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Unique is a good word for Ecrivan... I'm coming back to take this one in again... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I read of your inspiration for this write, in one of your replies. It all makes perfect sense to me now and I appreciate your work all the more!  Have a day full of surprises!--and may they all be good ones! EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ecrivan, I love this. It's very interesting. And, I loved Alfred Hitchcok's movies and stories. Remember the one named "Birds"? And, I loved "Psycho", too. Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...that's all I can think of at the moment...just wow |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Earth Angel as far as topics go then there is a boat load...everything from the thriller genre to the classic saga...and its a good thing to diversify when writing is concerned |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write,,,,, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your write ARCTIC WIND |
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