Open Poetry #27 |
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What If... (repost from Open #26) |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
What If… The ship’s bow was aimed at far bay ahead; The soft falling rain and cool ocean breeze Kept all below -- but I, yearning instead On open deck sought rare solitude seize. There in reflection by railing she stood; In dreams far beyond the gray falling mist. A woman my heart take within it would; A vision that feelings could not resist. What thoughts and emotions you hide within; What secrets with inconstant wind do you share? What passions you keep, my chance-fated kin, Bonded in solitude that we both wear? I know not what door is tempting your heart; What key to the future in my grasp I hold. -- Is our Fate that we forever part -- Or are You the One my stars have foretold? The bay is now near; the sight of docked ships; The sound of the horn will soon free the chain. But yet I move not, and my sealed, silent lips Imprison all words to my thoughts -- again. This but a transient dream of my heart; She dissolves in crowd; slow fades out her face. My voyage to unknown follows its part -- Indifferent time will her image erase. All the unspoken words; the notions banned; Our ship through unchartered waters we aim. The infinite lives we hold in our hand; Still -- at day's end -- but a single path claim. CG |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
All the unspoken words; the notions banned; Our ship through unchartered waters we aim. The infinite lives we hold in our hand; Still -- at day's end -- but a single path claim. CG, this is a beautiful and well-written poem. It needs to be read by more people. Maybe more will see it this time around. Hugs ![]() Ethel ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you reposted! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you for re-posting this. ![]() Still enjoying.. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
![]() Okay..I'll just keep putting this in faces until more people read it. ![]() You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write,,, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
YES! glad you reposted it, so i can read it now! ARCTIC WIND |
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