Open Poetry #27 |
Echo In Reply .....for Krawdad |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Echo In Reply I write the words to be your song so you can sing me all night long sweet printed wine you are my ink my thirst alone quenched in your drink caress this page it is my skin trace upon where my heart has been taste my words they are my lips wear the kiss within each script yes, I have touched you now touch is as deep as you allow |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I write the words to be your song so you can sing me all night long" Wow, this poem is amazing! Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I am speechless . . . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice Helen... I love how you write *s M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
DANG! this is fantastic, both the message and the presentation. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is incredible. I seriously would have to quote the whole verse if I dare attempted to quote my favorite lines. Amazing, simply, amazing! Patricia |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Perfect in every way... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one, girlfriend |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Well Written ARCTIC WIND |
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