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Open Poetry #27
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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-06-18 02:05 PM

(previously i posted this in 3 rictameters)


Surprised eyes made contact
our ears heard sweet
hello's

you gazed at me and I at you

we exchanged words that both
had longed to hear

at this moment in time both  
knew

you were for me always and I
for you

surprised darling
                    open your heart
allow love to enter

receive my advance of passion

let us enjoy a lifetime of romance      
together        
today and always
               without you I'm nothing
with you I'm all
          
honey
the time is now send the
      invitations
and order your white gown and
veil

you the bride and I the groom

so happy together we will
share each day

enjoying each as one till death      
parts          
us


A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-18-2003 02:12 PM).]
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2003-06-18 05:23 PM

In whatever form the words are beautiful dear QjQ.
The dream of a love lasting forever and beyond.
Love, Margherita
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-19 01:59 PM

yes
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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3 posted 2003-06-19 02:04 PM

So nice QJ~  This reinforces the fact, that love will find a way if it's meant to be.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-06-20 03:46 AM

Glenn, I liked the words either way...
this way or the rictameters.  
Ethel
JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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5 posted 2003-06-20 04:15 AM

I agree with Ethel, it's the meaning
within the words that touches the
reader.

I thought your Rictameter Trio was
exceptionally creative!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.
Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-02-25 07:18 PM

Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND
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