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the king of the captains |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
(i no its long but please give it a shot) hello again said the wandering wind i'll trade you a diamond for that ship your in the captain gave in sinking his family and friends for the wandering wind with all of her diamonds hello once again said the wandering wind i'll give you a kingdom for that world your in so that captain gave in casting humanity to oblivion so now what do i do said the king of his kingdom there's no one left to rule from here to oblivion so once more again hello said the wind I'll give you the world if you give me the man within but there's no one left here just me all alone I can't die now I have my own throne so 10 thousand years went by and once again came the wind but this time he asked if you give me your kingdom I'll give you back the past and tears fell from the captain, the king the last member of humanity I'll give you everything I have if I can just have my past so once again the wanderering wind cast this captain of kings back to the past He opened his eyes and to his surprise the world was a day old with ash filled skies what is this what is this cried the king of the captains I wanted my past but you've missed and now I'm here held captive you're free you're free said the wandering wind you're free to rule your kingdom in a time before men |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
Chris - your response has been removed due to the large amount of profanity contained within. If you have any questions about our guidelines, please review the following link: /pip/guidelines/rules.html [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (06-12-2003 05:21 AM).] |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
well i liked it chris... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
but there's no one left here just me all alone I can't die now I have my own throne That's a great verse...and such a well thought out poem. There's lots to be said for never going back again. Much enjoyed Chris~ and a belated welcome to you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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