Open Poetry #27 |
Say |
topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
Say you miss me, Like I miss you. Say you need me more than anyone else, Like I need you. Say you'd cry if I left you, Like I'd cry if you left me. Say you'll make it better, Like I feel when you're around. Say you'll do all you can to make bad things go, So I'll always feel safe with you. Say that true love is just once in a life time, Like the true love I found in you. Say love can move mountains, Lik ethe one I moved for you. Say that I'm the one for you, Like you're the one for me. But most of all Say you love me, Like I love you. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Cool poem It's expressing a great need, and that's an essence worth capturing. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
that hits right here*points to heart* very moving it made me think how i wish my ex wanted me like that. good write Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write, enjoyed. I'm not sure I've seen you lately, and don't know if I welcomed you when you came...come around more! Welcome to Passions! [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-18-2003 04:06 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Say, say, say...enjoyed...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Love the Name! ARCTIC WIND |
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