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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2003-06-18 01:28 AM



hatered all around me
somehow it has found me
tap tap tapping at my soul
fear and rage seep into my skin

as my body boils within
get away with it already take
me into your lighted eyes
touture me once again. for i am
here,show your crimsom face to me

i can feel your wrapth around me
no use hiding from me its all that
i see in the air. its all that i
can live to bare. lets go lets get done
i have had enough of this storm for
once.

lightening strikes me everyday
let it go away. ill face you if i will
ill tell you and meet you to your eyes
just take me take me let me die

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2003-06-18 01:40 AM


Different! But nice! Very cool
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2003-06-18 01:49 AM


thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-18 04:10 AM


this one hurts...
Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2003-06-18 04:35 AM


dident mean to hurt you hehe just the mood i was in at the time. im all better now..ahh poetry so cleansing

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Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-02-22 05:35 PM


Enjoyed the write

ARCTIC WIND

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