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visitvenus
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since 2002-12-30
Posts 101
PA, USA

0 posted 2003-06-18 01:09 AM


Dishes in the sink?
But wait, I need to think!

Laundry to be done?
But writing poetry's so fun!

Bills are overdue?
But I need the pages blue!

Dust is really falling?
But Passions is now calling!

Should really be in bed?
Nah, there's poetry to be read!

The midnight hour has passed?
Well then, I better read some more fast!



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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
1 posted 2003-06-18 01:30 AM


hehe very good

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-18 04:10 AM


hehehe...exactly how i feel! this place is addicting!
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
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3 posted 2003-06-18 07:38 AM


I was going to open this and read it yesterday, but I waited until today - I figured it would still be here, right?...

This is my kind of poem, visitvenus - I'll be reading more of your work for sure...


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-06-18 08:49 AM


venus:
ahahahaha yes . . .
you got it!
made me smile
and yawn lol
xxoo

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2003-06-18 08:53 AM


I enjoyed the read and the fun of it all, great to see you here at Passions, great that poetry has brought you here, now one of the family. Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

visitvenus
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since 2002-12-30
Posts 101
PA, USA
6 posted 2003-06-19 08:34 PM


Thanks all!  I was long past due to write something a little light hearted!

-Venus

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-02-24 05:36 PM


haha I love Nans smiley!

Enjoyed the write!

ARCTIC WIND

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