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topsyturveychick
Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus

0 posted 2003-06-17 09:57 PM

If only you knew
The feelings my heart
Contains for you,
Maybe everything would change.

Would you understand
Understand my craving
That's satisfied by a touch of your hand?
Or is it that you don't know?

Would you recognise
The admiration that
Is shown in my eyes?
Or is it that you don't know?

Would you realise
That I want no-one else
Because everything said and done different is all just lies?
Or is it that you don't know?

Would you wonder
Why you arn't here with me
To hold me through lighting and thunder?
Or is it that you don't know?

If it's becuase you don't know
How will my feelings be shown?
I'll never have the chance to hold you.

But if I can't hold you tonight,
Then I'll dream about you forever.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-17 10:00 PM

"But if I can't hold you tonight,
Then I'll dream about you forever."

Perfectly wrapped at the end, like a gift. Very nice write

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-18 02:08 PM

Seems like I spend too much time dreaming...as the song says "Ain't nothing like the real thing baby." James

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

3 posted 2003-06-18 04:47 PM

*Tear* "But if I can't hold you tonight,
Then I'll dream about you forever." *Tear* So beautiful. I can lie and say I don't know what you mean and how you feel, but that's mean because I do know. I've been through it more times then many and finally, everything is straight...I love what I put in quotes. I really enjoyed those two lines. Awesome job! *Thumbs up* Peace. Love. Happiness. ~*~Kirah~*~

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

[This message has been edited by WindSong (06-18-2003 04:51 PM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-22 08:47 PM

Enjoyed your Work...

ARCTIC WIND

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