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Sea (haiku first attempt) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I carry oceans enraputured in the raindrops buried in the sea |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is a precious haiku, sweet friend, I hope you write more of these gems as you depict natures splendor so wonderfully! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-17-2003 09:39 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And a lovely one it is too! Nicely done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very pretty. I love these little Japanese verses. Don't you? The syllable poems are really fun to do.  Ethel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Thats a Very Lovely Haiku You got there! Nice first try! ARCTIC WIND |
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