Open Poetry #27 |
Lost Sailors |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ On eerie nights With fog so dreary, Near rocky shores Of deep Lake Erie, Voices echo Thru' dead of night, With wailing pleas Of sailors' plight. Spectral beings In swirling mists, Rise from waters Of dark abyss. They search for loves They left behind~ Unseeing eyes That cannot find. 'Twas many years Since mighty gale, Rocked the boat And ripped mainsail. The vessel sank To water's grave, And with it took The sailors brave. Lamenting sounds, Chill deep the bones, Of those who hear Their mournful moans. 'Twas long ago In glory days, Lost sailors sank In Erie's waves. On eerie nights, With fog so dreary, Near rocky shores Of deep Lake Erie, Voices echo Thru' dead of night, With wailing pleas Of sailors' plight. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-17-2003 05:04 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful and whimsical song of the sea, e.a. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is an awesome story. You made it seem real. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
I like this, it's very descriptive. I live in Michigan.. I dunno it was cool to read of something near me. Lol. I'm easily amused. .Echo. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Linda, I too get touched by these stories so much, dearest friend, I hate to have to hear of families grieve over their lost ones at sea and I cried during the movie Titanic especially! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
There is a tradition among fishing families that each mans' sweater be knitted with unique cabling for the purpose of identifcation My grandfather was the 1st male in the family to actually have a grave. (Ironically he passed away at my aunts house on Ocean Blvd) These tales stir that part of my being. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
oooooooohhhhhhhh so sad and spooky, Linda! ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo, I love this |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This gives me the shivers... and I'm loving them. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
inkedgoddess ~ Thank you! In actuality, I have written several "songs of the sea". I do believe that I shall turn this poem into yet another one! Have a great day! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Julie ~ "awesome" and "real"--much appreciated! Enjoy your day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Laqe ~ Living near the Great Lakes, I'm sure you've heard of many such stories. Peace & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Stories of families losing loved ones to watery graves and never finding their bodies, hit me especially hard. How ironic that I had written poetry and songs about such things for years, only to one day have it reflected in my own reality. You may recall that my sister's son (I was his "second Mom" as he would say), along with 5 other boys, disappeared on Lake Ontario a few years ago and their bodies have never been found. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wranx ~ How ironic that your grandfather ended up being claimed by the "Ocean" as well. Interesting note on the cable-knit sweaters of fishermen! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
skyshine ~ I suppose you'd call it an "S & S" write! Enjoy your day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Thanks for saying so! Have an enjoyable day! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
suthern ~ You southerners aren't the only ones who aim to please! lol Huggums, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WOW! EA- Very Chilling to the spine! I loved it! ARCTIC WIND |
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