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Open Poetry #27

Everything We're Not

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-17 05:50 PM

Woke up this moring,
sipping hot cocoa over a luminous screen.
From the other room you yell at me,
about not getting to bed early.
About staying out untill dawn
when I have to work.
Total chaos
is infused within my head,
who are YOU to tell me what I'd better do?
Put my arm around your shoulder and say
"Well, toots, you better get used to me
being this way."
I can find my release
from the pain, and all the tears I've cried
will run back into my eyes.

And just like the heat stings my mouth,
it attacks the air around my words.
Your mouth has stopped moving,
like a movie..
You're so boring.
But there's something about you,
that makes me want to
need more than what I've got.
Sink into my bed forever and
drown in everything we're not.

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

1 posted 2003-06-17 07:30 PM

But there's something about you,
that makes me want to
need more than what I've got.
Sink into my bed forever and
drown in everything we're not.

I really loved this ending, and I can so relate to the words your telling, believe me!

~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-21 02:10 PM

I very Much Enjoyed the Piece Of work

ARCTIC WIND

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