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Open Poetry #27

Caught in the Light

Mollie963
Junior Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-06-17 02:44 PM

The Light leaves
Impatience imprinted
On the wall
Where you directed your
Blinding Intentions.

[This message has been edited by Mollie963 (06-17-2003 04:05 PM).]

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2003-06-17 04:15 PM

You said a lot in a few words....sometimes things can leave remnants like that. Well done.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Mollie963
Junior Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 14

2 posted 2003-06-17 05:35 PM

thanks much the feedback! glad you liked it... appreciate it!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-06-18 11:07 AM

You imprinted your poem on my mind.
An image forms and it is of Light.
Lovely!
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-22 07:12 PM

Yes You did, A lot in just little words!

Wonderfully written!

ARCTIC WIND

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