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Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-06-13 01:41 PM



Adrenile pumping
Butterflies galore
A packed studium
quiet in anticipation
We enter the gates
pumed and ready to win
Each jump flows with ease
The wind blowing past us
I can feel you are there for me
ready to win
to jump
to soar
and working together as one
towards that home stretch
one obstacle to go
my heart beating fast
Your whole body working to it's max
and in a second it is over
And we ride towards our victory

© Copyright 2003 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-13 01:45 PM


wow, what a trip this took me on! my heart beating fast then a cheer then a big smile
Martini
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2 posted 2003-06-13 02:53 PM


Well thank you for the cheer.... My horse and I won our last competition together, we are going to retire him now he has served his time as a competition horse and now he deserves to live the life of luxury but it was great to go out with a bang!!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-06-14 06:39 PM


Sounds exciting, must be nice to prance around the winners circle.     

Nice reading Martini~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-14 06:41 PM


Congratulations for the victory...must be sweet...James
Foxyoasis
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5 posted 2003-06-14 06:43 PM


wow! i loved the way you expressed everything! good job!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2003-06-18 11:08 AM


Thank you all for your replies

the winners circle is a very very nice place to be




Glad you enjoyed it

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-02-22 07:16 PM


Your Welcome! this is good!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

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