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El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-06-17 02:05 PM

Love is water
Lapping at the crust
That encapsulates our souls
Turning it to dust
That drifts away

Love is raindrops
Tip-tapping on the mind
Inviting you to open the door
And see the beauty
You may dare to find

Love is a housewife
Making her home in the heart
Leaving smiles in every corner—
The gifts she imparts
Changes the heart
Like nothing else can!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-06-17 09:12 PM

Love is water
Lapping at the crust
That encapsulates our souls
Turning it to dust
That drifts away
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thats quite a powerful image and analogy...someone has inspired lovely things in your pen once again.
well done poet sir

No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-06-17 10:02 PM

"Love is raindrops
Tip-tapping on the mind"

Wow, this poem is exellent! Thank you for sharing this .

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-06-17 10:17 PM

Beautiful piece here...
Perfectly expressed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

topsyturveychick
Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus

4 posted 2003-06-17 10:24 PM

Really leaves warm and fuzzys in you. Great poem. Great analogies. It's cool.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-18 02:00 AM

This is so beautiful that I'm going to keep it so that I can read it over and over.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

6 posted 2003-06-18 02:11 AM

very nice

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2003-06-18 02:17 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Benjamin.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-06-18 04:02 AM

that's what it is! nice!

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-06-18 08:24 AM

Thanks for the replies, everyone. Keep living, and loving...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-02-22 05:41 PM

Beautifully Written

ARCTIC WIND

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