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The test
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The test |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Heaven waited in her eyes Her smile The lure of demise Her breath The breeze of spring delight Her way The joy of every night Her scent The loving rose in bloom Change The ever road to doom Promise Just the moment’s word Hope The mending wing of bird Love The thought of always true Each day A test we’re going through |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Rick... and each day does become a test ..for some of endurance for others a test to maintain... I enjoyed |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Cpat Hair, how true is your reply, the test is a little different for everyone, but also so much the same, the stayers keep trying. Thanks for your reply, very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick So very true are your words and for many it can be such a struggle of emotions. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Hi there, Rick. Wonderful, I enjoyed the style and the words. Gives me hope...but you always do that. Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rick, this is a very good write and one to ponder. Enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all the beautiful things in life, yes good write here, m'friend |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Sue, how are you my friend? Lovely to see your comments here, we all struggle with our emotions from time to time, hard not to, but that is life. Thanks for the visit, much appreciated. Patricia, nice to see you here, you always say the lovely things, which I am always grateful for, thanks you. Hi Chris, we shall ponder together, thanks for the reply, much appreciated. Dear Dixie, lovely to see you as well my friend, all the good things in life indeed, the wish that our dreams do seek, the words that our wishes speak. Take care and thanks for the visit. To you all my friends, again thank you, take care, till we meet again. Sincerely Rick |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Rick, you couldnt have penned it better amazing xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, my friend...each test that we go through, makes the bond stronger betweeen the two. Right?  "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
too bad there aren't as many stayers anymore. People give up too easily M |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
littlewing, you are so kind to give me this wonderful complement, thank you so much, hugs and kisses back. garysgirl, thanks for your reply, sometimes the test makes us weaker, it can be a battle, as we all know. nakdthoughts, staying, you are so right, not too many stay around anymore, the greener grass and all that, but sometimes habit retards happiness; I am pondering life always. To you all my friends, again, thank you for the replies and your friendship. Sincerely Rick |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
Hi Rick Well..... this is a different style! I liked it...very much to the point....but ...well....different.....why? Regards Lynda X |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello Rick, good day to you, this was astounding, thank you for sharing. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lynda, nice to see you here again, late on the Net tonight, worth logging on for your reply, thanks. A big hello to all the family!!! Love Rick. LeeJ, thank you so much for this reply, very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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