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Tenderness
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Tenderness |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Tenderness tenderness is trimmed from trees I saw it it was there on the ground gentle shoots all green cut short from growth now gone |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good thoughts expressed,,, QjQ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Careful who you let do the pruning.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Very enjoyable and I've read it several times. Guess we'll have to be careful who's holding the clippers. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a tender insight.....I hope nobody trims you any time soon..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
nice, sad.you have great tenderness. thanks for sharing your work. Goldenrose. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This reminds me of my own contribution to the tenderness. I think you're right. Tenderness comes from growing, but dies with growth. Yikes - where did I get that? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: I can relate to this in two ways: 1: the tenderness ok easy one 2: it reminds me also of my garden which I have lost and that was a source of tenderness You have touched me twice today Lady thank you xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Ablosutely beautiful! Thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Alot of things get trimmed from trees early on...patience, strength H..ope..eew, looks, etc etc |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Wow, so very expressive and creative. Your mind is incredible. Love this. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very interesting write, Helen.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nice Pictures created! ARCTIC WIND |
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