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Open Poetry #27

....PlEaDiNg...My...CaSe...4...ThE...AfTeRLiFe...

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

0 posted 2003-06-16 09:48 AM

....PlEaDiNg...My...CaSe...4...ThE...AfTeRLiFe...

I knew the grim reaper would one day show his face
and take me to a place beyond earth and space
the pearly gates i have arrived..waited a long time in this line
but nows my chance to gain wings and shine
i know i havent liveed the life based upon rules of the bibles testaments
but my past is irellavent.. ive paid dues and spent time to repent
yes i was neglegent of lifes elements...
with age comes wisdom and ive gained intellegence
grant me this place in heaven so i can watch over my children as they grow older
my life and times has passed... i just want to guide them..
be the guardian angel watching over there shoulders
ive left behind a lot of bad times and ive been thru the tribulations
this marks the end... the peaceful end to my suffering amongst a faceless nation
to be honest if you based my life on earth as means of letting me in
ive commited sins and should be banned from the paradise within
but then again.. i made ammends.. showed love to all my friends
... and pleaded my case with sincere words...nothing pretend
ive spoken to you straight forward
and put myself out in the open for the world to see
even though god was supposedly watching me..
from every mistake that ive made.. to every thought ive had that was unpure
i kept the faith that the most high would keep me and my family secure
ive struggled all my life in the real world and had to restart twice
i just want a piece of the peace and tranquility of the afterlife

.:*^°¤Gw®i†êr6¤°^*:.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-06-16 09:54 AM

May you have the peace and the tranquility of the afterlife, in THIS life! I enjoyed the openess and honesty of this write--a baring of your poetic soul.

Peace, Love & Light,
Earth Angel

P.S. Very artistic signature!

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

2 posted 2003-06-16 11:03 AM

^^ thanx for the reply.. and yeah i decided to make a creative signature... glad ya liked it

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-02-06 05:22 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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