Open Poetry #27 |
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Raising Some Fun In Louisiana |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Subtited Raising Some H*** In Louisiana Storming jazz, beating rain, blues skies feeling pain. Thundering drums, trumpeting breezes, steamy clarinet, saxophone wailing, swirling minds, orchestrated harmony, singing blue. Crystal clear notes, the heart’s tune, rhythmic inner emotions, moving the soul. Fireplace warmth, steamy love, vibrating notes, get down blues. Sweet mama, feel those hormones, sweet vixen set me on fire in body gyrations. Shake those walls, rattles the bones, raise the dead, spirits are wailing, the ghosts are dancing. Sweat that music out feeling so alive move that body for the band is raising some h***, in Louisiana. D.Lester Young Somewhere in America not on company time 06/11/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
not on company time...now thats funny LOL ...h |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Dave--haven't forgotten you (this place just has grown so much!) But I did want to thank you for this, you made me remember why I love this hellhole. ![]() and yep, you got my foot tapping too, brought to mind a little ditty penned by the legendary Hank Williams--remember "Jambalaya"? : "Thibodaux,to Fontaineaux, de place is buzzin', kinfolk come to see Yvonne by da dozen. Dress in style and go hog wild, me oh my oh. Son of a gun, we'll have big fun on da bayou. Jambalaya and a crawfish pie and a fillet gumbo 'cause tonight I'm gonna see my ma chaz amio. Pick guitar, fill fruit jar and be gayo, son of a gun, we'll have big fun on de bayou. Settle down far from town, get me a pirogue and I'll catch all de fish in the bayou. Swap my mon to buy Yvonne what she need-o. Son of a gun, we'll have big fun on da bayou." Thanks for the morning smiles. And I'll tell my kids they can blame my blaring Hank Williams on YOU this morning! ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was just there... but you and sen are gonna make me homesick! LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"sweat that music out"--great line!--and I believe you just did! ![]() Warm hugs, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write ARCTIC WIND |
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