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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-01 01:55 PM

Just Another Day

if I were to offer
you a way out
would you give me
a way in
could you reach
past the emptiness
to the tightness within
is there a
light in kindness
where I only
know the dark
reaching to
the center
to strike a spark
I know there is
another hand
and it can help me
find my way
for I feel
so lost
in
today is just
another day

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (08-01-2003 08:16 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-01 01:57 PM

"I know there is
another hand
and it can help me
find my way
for I feel
so lost
in
today is just
another day"

..I just
understand.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2003-08-01 02:09 PM

You do send some enjoyable words down the center of these blue pages
As always

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-01 02:45 PM

I'm sorry...you know I see

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-08-01 04:42 PM

This one wraps the reader in a hurt that haunts... but does so beautifully... well done! *S*

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-08-01 05:33 PM

enjoyed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-08-01 06:30 PM

hugs sigh and general woes and such

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2003-08-01 08:02 PM

Today is a day you touch someone.
Today you touch me . . .

s.a.g.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

8 posted 2003-08-01 10:39 PM

you are the only person i have ever read who used short lines to such advantage.

achingly beautiful

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-08-01 10:44 PM

Helen, I have accomplished much when I know the proper day of the week . . .
like a swirling madness of ups and downs
over
and
over
again . . .
xxoo

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

10 posted 2003-08-02 12:38 PM

Today
is the only day

in the words of my
great american poet
friend the great
Jazzbo Jim Chandler

the word
is all there is

and on that
you have
my word

to your words
shalom

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-08-03 12:04 PM

Amen.

This is such truth, so dead-pan honest. Much here, and much behind....thank you for saying what has to be a piece of most of us.

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______________Ratleader______________

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

12 posted 2003-08-06 09:02 AM

These are beautiful images so very well written. Maggie.

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