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Open Poetry #27

Feeding The Beast

eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-01 12:39 PM

Feeding The Beast

Awake, get up!
I’m still thirsty
Sipll a few drops more on my dry tongue
What? you have shed enough blood for me?
Silence, pawn.
I can play you until your veins run empty
Your knife is my marionette
You hands are my own
Oh, hush, darling, don’t be afraid
And come closer, won’t you?
Spare me just a few more shavings of your skin
Or just one more cup to soothe my poor parched throat
Have pity on an ancient beast
There’s a good dear now
I trully must comment you
Quite delicious, really
Oh, don’t cry
It can’t hurt that much
Besides, you like it anyways
Oh shush! I know you do.
What’s that?
Yes, I love you too
Ssssss, now, more blood

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-01 12:41 PM

Wow, sounds like a beast draingin a soul.Just my opinion.Very powerful here.
angelblueyes

Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

2 posted 2003-08-01 02:39 PM

Very Nice! I quite enjoyed this. You have a way with words.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-08-01 02:46 PM

Kinda spooky way to wake up! But each to his own! lol

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-08-01 04:12 PM

Enjoyed...James

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2003-08-02 10:56 AM

OUCH!

You have a funny way of showing your love ... but then many do ... Hahahha!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-08-02 11:06 AM

But, but I think the beast really just wants to be loved back. Tone it down a little. Find the gentler approach. Attrach more with honey than vinegar. *Yikes*....this makes me think of the old saying.....hurts so good. That saying always leaves me with a bad taste...Ewwwww,...Grosses me out! Yuck.

SharaRose @-->--

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