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She Sighs |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She Sighs "Some men know how to treat a woman." Bebe whispers into my ear. "They choose soft and gentle words from their heart. They say the sweet words a woman needs to hear." She sighs and then she says, "And if a man can make me fall in love, my world is his to possess. My heart, he will embrace. My beauty, his to caress." JamesLee July31 2003 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, from one who can be sweettalked, yea, we like it |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Yes...so true...but the words must be truthful expressions for me. Enjoyed. Patricia |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perhaps one can make a woman fall in love with him, but can and will he keep her..if he capable of knowing love and what a woman wants? I don't think so...he is only capable of romancing short term...and yeah, a real sweet talker...but is not capable of going beyond....a good man, may not always say what you want to hear...but...the long term effect is that he is sincere, forever and will grow with you Very thought provoking poem...thank you for writing and sharing...a good good lesson |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, the words are only sweet, if they are true and his heart, backs them up  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A man may be sweet with the words, but they mean not a thing unless they are spoken from his heart.  EA |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
James super poem. You have a lot of talent. Keep on posting/ Jordyn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so sweet, James. I love it.  Hugs Ethel |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
*sigh* |
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