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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-08-01 07:16 AM


Idling

I idled
In a hall
Of thought
Leaned a post
And nothing wrought

But Pixies
Seemed to
Lace the air
In shadows
That
I would not dare.

And I
Wondered
If I
Broke
The spell

Would I
Touch
On
Heaven
Or
Hell


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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-01 07:22 AM



Would I
Touch
On
Heaven
Or
Hell

those magical pixies will lead to the well

good Friday morning

inot2B
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2 posted 2003-08-01 07:25 AM



Sir, your word is always a touch of heaven.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-08-01 07:28 AM


inkedgoddess
Top of the morning to ya sweet lady.

inot2B
Now that is a lovely comment.

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2003-08-01 07:41 AM




Tink says you can have heaven and Randy the hell. Randy said that sounds swell LOL

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-08-01 07:55 AM


JM,
How did I know you would say that?
WWRS


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6 posted 2003-08-01 07:57 AM


Ah, a little fairy dust in my coffee...

methinks this is HEAVEN, sy.


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-08-01 08:09 AM


serenity  
I think it is both. LOL

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-08-01 08:56 AM


A heavenly write this morn Sy!

And I'm positive as to where those pixies would lead you.
Now, share a pot of tea with me?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-08-01 09:04 AM


Nancy,
I'd be delighted my dear.

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-08-01 09:06 AM



Idle awhile
the day is mild
bring with ye
thy inner child
let little thoughts
whisper anew
and smile in glee
at pixies three
for your little ones
will dance away
if our Sy smiles
and idles his day....

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-01-2003 09:06 AM).]

cusick
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11 posted 2003-08-01 09:09 AM


This is so delicately written. I was back in Mayo watching the little people dancing around a tree. Maggie
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12 posted 2003-08-01 09:12 AM


Awww, this is so sweet, Seymour.  
Goodmorning, my friend.  
Have a good day!!  
Ethel

LeeJ
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13 posted 2003-08-01 09:19 AM


well, the pixies take you by the hand and lead you to into heaven, right here on earth..smiles and hugs, wonderful write
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-08-01 09:31 AM


Sunshine,
You are the only sun I can tke without getting sun burn.

Maggie,
Thank you and hold that thought.

Ethel,
Good morning love.

LeeJ
I know they are both right here. Thank you my friend.

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15 posted 2003-08-01 09:42 AM




Hello dear Seymour !!
Sorry I am late -
I was dancing with the
pixies in the morning dew.
They made some butter tarts
Especially for you !!

hugs, Chris

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16 posted 2003-08-01 09:42 AM


Seymour,
I like the flow, and the thoughts? way cool....it's like a glimpse into a dream....

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17 posted 2003-08-01 09:50 AM


Mornin' Mr. T.!

--It's heaven all the way!--for you, Dear Cherubic One!

Love ya bunches!
EA

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-08-01 10:02 AM


Chris
Butter tarts would be soothing. LOL

SEA
And you were on the heaven side.

Earth Angel
Bunches is good.

Kahlil
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19 posted 2003-08-01 11:34 AM


I think it's so heavenly that I'm not going to go to work today.  Staying home to idle awhile....You're an inspiration!  ~K~
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-08-01 11:40 AM


Kahlil
Inspiration is good anywhere you get it. LOL

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (08-01-2003 01:44 PM).]

angelblueyes
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21 posted 2003-08-01 11:57 AM


Follow the pixie to heaven's light
For you are the angel shining bright
For a man as sweet as you
Could never be anything but true

Loved reading this, brought a smile to my face this morning.Thanks
angelblueyes

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2003-08-01 01:46 PM


angelblueyes
My thanks to you for the read and like.

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23 posted 2003-08-01 04:35 PM


I idled
In a hall
Of thought

And brought a gem out with you. *S* I enjoyed this, Seymour. *S*

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24 posted 2003-08-01 05:32 PM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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25 posted 2003-08-01 05:50 PM


suthern
Thank you dear for the read and nice reply.


vandana
Thank you for the enjoyed.

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