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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-01 12:29 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#128

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


days untied
shred to threads of
perseverence

they split us

like a branch
breaking


with a snap


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-08-01 12:33 PM


This one's going in my library.
angelblueyes

x8x_bigmike
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2 posted 2003-08-01 12:46 PM


in its brevity, it leaves me at a place without remembering where I started...

great read,

Mike

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-01 12:48 PM


damn, you're good at the short ones
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2003-08-01 02:44 AM


Crystal, I am honored.  Thank you.

Mike:  as long as it encourages you to contemplate, then I have "succeeded"...

passing shadows:  these are fun poetic etudes.  Thank you for your thought...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Janette
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5 posted 2003-08-02 11:03 AM


I heard it ... carry on, carry on.

Sharp writing here.

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2003-08-02 08:17 PM


Thank you, Janette.  Luckily, when traveling these "blue skies", there's no carry on limit...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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