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Open Poetry #27

Heavy Heart

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-07-31 04:32 PM

heavy heart
sinks down to hell
brazes the flames
springs back up again
ocean water cools
turns broken heart blue
to the brim ,liquid
no room, nothing left
won't stop absorbing it
the leak of black oil slick
the goo clogging
heart still absorbing,throbbing
thick black sadness
overwhelming darkness
pumping,filling my veins..

I have no eyes left to see
you walking away from me

( I ve been away for a while, I haven't had a comp! but I finally bought one!!! I m back yay )

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-07-31 05:03 PM

good to see you back *s
M

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

2 posted 2003-08-03 01:30 AM

hello to you i say. good to talk ya.
i'm sorry to say i didn't like this one that much~sorry~ it's just to sad for me i don't like to read things this sad and think different

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-03 04:34 AM

very cool write...you know I love your stuff

nice new pic there too

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-08-03 08:21 AM

Perhaps a bit sad but I thik it touches something in all of us. Thanks for the read. Maggie

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