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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
His touch was the kiss of an angel. Eyes heavenly blue. Swore he would love me forever, said he would always be true. Lost in desire. My senses on fire, Forgetting the golden rule Of Marry in haste, I'd no time to waste couldn't wait to whisper I do. Now I'm stuck with a devil, brutish, domineering my life. Rueing the day that I met him, Regretting becoming his wife. Daily I'm planning and scheming thinking of what I can do. Of ways to be rid of my demon, forever. Would't you? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! The devil in angel's clothing scenario!--of course that doesn't apply to your's truly!  Seriously speaking, it does seem that you have found yourself in a bit of a pickle. All I can suggest is for you to pray for wisdom, strength, courage---and guidance! No one deserves to be treated that way! Healing hugs, Earth Angel |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I wish the best for you. Be strong and make your stand. Don't allow yourself to be hurt anymore.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Earth Angel and Sauni for your concern but this is not about me. My poor husband is a real angel. Unfortunately I based this on a dear friend.Maggie |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Angel, I'm really glad that this isn't about you. This man does sound like a real devil. I hope your friend is okay.  Hugs to you and her  Ethel |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Super poem. It made me think of my own poem called Angels. |
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