Open Poetry #27 |
There Is Always Tomorrow |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
There Is Always Tomorrow Maybe a change of heart Since last we had spoken Could it be circumstance Why promises are broken The promises I held within I believed each to be true Perhaps that's why I linger Having shown faith in you Of the past conversations Where we shared lovingly Hope you can remember What you had said to me There is always tomorrow For repairing the broken To be continued hopefully Where honesty is spoken HopeĀ©2003 |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So uplifting! Thanks, Eric |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Eric , when I am down I do try to look on the positive side Hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hope, your style is unmistakeable tomorrow, yes...good write packed with emotion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, I really hope that he reads this. There is so much love and longing in it. Hugs to you, Lady Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This is going into my library, because I feel it so badly in my bones. tomorrow is all we can think about, hoping for some answers. and we recall those promises, we know they felt and meant, but are at a loss to know why they were broken. circumstance, people change, they fooled us? who knows. It makes you want to never trust someone with your soul ever again, Hope, you always get my mind ticking on overdrive. much love to you, gem xxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
There is always tomorrow For repairing the broken To be continued hopefully Where honesty is spoken Thank you! I need to hear this. Honest words indeed! Patricia |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Lovely read. There is so much optimism in the last stanza. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks gem , yes I am often asking "Why and waiting for him to reply Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you James , your kind reply is so appreciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Dix , yes there are always tomorrow , I hope ends some of my sorrow Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Ethel for your caring reply , yes I did send this to him Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Patricia , yes I only wished others could be more honest Hope |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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