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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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History ~ Present . . . The other day face to face realizing that it was fate eye to eye seeing the beauty me allowing to let it go into a different direction from the life that was planned still wanting to bring it back but history tells me it will never be the same not wanting same to be hoping, wondering if once together again to live the present not forgetting the past writing a new history to make it last. bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (07-31-2003 01:42 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write Bernie...write on write on |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Writing a new history can be exciting and gratifying--may this be true for you!   EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very much enjoyed...thank you for writing and sharing.   |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
but history tells me it will never be the same not wanting same to be hoping, wondering if once together again to live the present not forgetting the past writing a new history to make it last. Hi Bernie This is a really good poem, and what needs to be done. If you just repeated history, it wouldn't work out, would it?  Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-31-2003 01:54 PM).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
passing shadows, thank you very much, i know i don't write as much as i used to but i'll work on it. EA I think it will, just can't repeat the past. LeeJ thank you for reading and Ethel you are so right, should have done this years ago.... So the answer to your question no it wouldn't work out. Thank you Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awesome write here! I enjoyed this a lot! Sincerely, Sauni Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Saunni thank you bernieA smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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