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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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She’s a gypsy in every way Always moving Never staying in any one place Long enough For one to get more than a glance Her name? I know of several One to match each of her histories Each history, suiting a purpose Each purpose serving a need Every need, needing a new name And so, she goes... She goes.. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And so she flows, and flows  Wonderful use of a metaphor, could be many, many things here Ed! I took it as a river, or ocean but to some she would be a woman I suppose, yes?[This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-31-2003 11:36 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This twirls. I can hear the silver bells on her ankles, and her name... is everywoman.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I should probably take a few lessons from her...to keep me on the go *s nice, Ed M |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I know someone like that, in fact, several someones like that! I believe we all have the souls of a gypsy, but some of us have the blood...I particularly enjoyed this write, my friend! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Colorful and changing and so hard to capture. A wonderful portrait in words. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes! Love this. Chris  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
now I've got that stevie nicks song stuck in my head  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another great write Ed. This struck me as restless spirit of the wind...interestingly enough...I have always thought of the wind as male. Hehe... There ya have it! TD |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But she leaves memories... and so does this write. *S* Excellent! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh I love this... She is indeed a free spirit. I think many of us here have a bit of gypsy in our soul. Excellemt write... Off to find my tambourine. ~Smiles & winks, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh to have a gypsy soul . . . one day . . . I loved this Ed nice and lifting (to me it is lol) xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like your kind of woman, Mystery Man!   Linda |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"and so she goes" indeed she does. She gotta keep that gypsy blood pumpin ey Ed? Marvelous m'friend, smiling at you bud. Maree fate is not just |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poem! Loved it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx, A nebulous wrire. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. Her name is "legion." hugs yeti... the witch exits, cackling... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey Ed -- I think I know her... How quickly the Tarantella became a mournful violin solo... Despite the cold ashes, at least the campfire held warmth if but for a little while... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I laugh now because you said this didnt deserve THIS number but it does it does EveryDuetMan  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I understandI will always be shadows though |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
For one to get more than a glance Her name? I know of several ____________ great, great capture Mike _____________________________ |
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Lady Moiraine Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 24Florida |
I enjoy reading your work. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay so I gave this a second thought and I think it is definitely not a river, but it could have beene yanno. So now I think it could be the spirit of a woman - do I get a second guess |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sounds a lot like me... *chuckles* loved this! ~Tier |
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